And all i found were these tears in your eyes.

by jordynn   Aug 5, 2006


And all i found were these tears in your eyes,

so i put them in a box for safe keeping, so that when they were needed you would not need to bother making more

you could recycle them and use them again, but i looked in the box the other day cause i was feeling down, and well, they must have been kidnapped, cause i cant find them anymore,

i made you some new ones, but they ran away, i tried again, but they didn't want to play,

so they went into the bath so that they could be washed down the drain, i tried to stop them, i ran after them,

but then i saw your face in the water, staring up at me...tonight, i will put my tears in a bottle, and float them out to sea,

so that they can find the ones i meant to replace the ones you cried for me.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany

    Good Job! i really really like it. you have a talent!! :D

  • 17 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    I was a little confused at what it meant, but I think I understand what you were trying to get across. If I do then if was REALLY good...and if I don't then I'm still really lost, lol. But I did like the phrasiology and the idea of the poem was cool. Keep it up!
    ~Jules

  • 17 years ago

    by Kellie

    Hey, i had to read this twice to understand it but i think i finally got it! :P it sounds pretty good. i really loved the end bit , that really stood out to me.
    xxxkelliexxx

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