The Forest
by Mommy And Me Aug 5, 2006
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Standing in a forest the tree is alone |
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17 years ago
by Lovely Bones
Wow that's pretty deep. I didn't know where you were going with this poem at first but you definately surprised me! This is one of the best poems I have ever read, hands down. Keep it up!
God Bless,
Sarah-Joy -
17 years ago
by Natalie
Loved this. Speshly how you repeated some of those words at the end in the last stanza. Very well done. The flow was good too. Nothing that I'd change. Keep it up!
Natalie`` -
17 years ago
I put u on my favs :):):):) xxx alex xxx
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17 years ago
Wow cant believe how good that was
this is really good some poems have this thing about them that no one should say how to improve because it will spoil their work.
this is one of them poems its YOUR work and only YOU should suggest things to fix it otherwise it wont be your poem if you know what im sayin
lovely poem though :):) keep it up xx
would you comment on some of my poems please i like as much feedback as i can get :):) thnx xxx alex xxx -
17 years ago
This is really good some poems have this thing about them that no one should say how to improve because it will spoil their work.
this is one of them poems its YOUR work and only YOU should suggest things to fix it otherwise it wont be your poem if you know what im sayin
lovely poem though :):) keep it up xx
would you comment on some of my poems please i like as much feedback as i can get :):) thnx xxx alex xxx
