What the tears have done

by G A Darkened   Aug 7, 2006


Looking up i see the sun,
looking down i see my life,
they burn away with a pation,
burning away my skin,
and now it hurts,
and i want to get away,
to feel nothing its what i wish,
to pull my mind into my self,
and never see out my self again,

and at my wish the tears come and cool the burning pain inside me,
washing away the feeling from my body,
leaving me cold and angry,
heart gone and eyes wet,
hating love cuz i can never feel it,

i walk as though i were alone,
unable to touch anyone,
unable to feel the love i make,

the tears come a rake my body and i shake, till the darkness takes me, now the tears have cool the pain and left my like a stone,

unable to feel,
unable to love,
unable to hope,

these tears have left me with out the life i should feel,

i am numb,
i am gone,
i am done ,
i am lost,

and i don't even know what should be done,

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  • 17 years ago

    by LostForever

    Its really good. shows lots of emotion. xx

  • 17 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Ur Soooo good poet!!! a another 5/5 for me!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Freak7265

    I like this one...Nice job!

  • 17 years ago

    by MorbidCupcake

    U wrote exactly wht i was feeling! Kinda creepy!....jk lol
    Ur really really good!

  • 17 years ago

    by sweet_tears

    I really love this one this one i can relate this is ur best poem yet.I LOVE IT.5/5.
    Sweet_tearsxoxo

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