He Says: The Break Up

by Ashes of a Black Rose aka Night Child   Aug 7, 2006


Father i've sinned
you know that i've done it
over and over again
i come to you friend
lookin to rest
i know im a mess again

he says"i dont feel right kissing you"
he says "this time, i think we're through"
hetalks to me like i wont pull through
on and on, and it just goes on and on

he says "i dont see you the way i saw you before"
he says, he says "i dont love you anymore"

and mother ive lied
cried over and over again to save me from life
sorry i denied
denied him every time
every time he tried
look back and tell me why it really ends
get talkin, why'd it have to begin?
he says that we're "probably better off as friends"
on and on and on and on it goes

he says "i dont see you the way i saw you bfore"
he says, he says, yeah,
he says "i dont see you the way i saw you before"
he says, he says, " i dont love you anymore"

you see, father i sinned
you know that i've done it
you know that i've done it again...

*inspired by my ex, Dan, and a band called Unwritten Law

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  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Nicely written again, with tons of emotion...But you repeated yourself a bit too much for my likings and it sounded a lot like your other poem.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    Yeah.
    I broke up with a guy called daniel AGES ago he was/is a prick.

    I was confused at first but i understand now(your poem)

    its very good
    5/5
    ~Emah
    p.s thank you for the comment its appreciated so much

  • 17 years ago

    by Mousie

    Nice job, i think this was my favorite actually... it was different, i really enjoyed it... keep it up 5/5

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