Blooms and Fallen Petals

Awwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!! hahaha this was so cute it made me giggle!! Normally teens right about this but even someone your age can still feel so passionate about their lover.. (not like your old..and I don't blame you your lover is hot stuff! lol) I loved this poem it was so beautiful!!...but umm..I do agree with Darien..the ending was sad :-(
All in all great write!!
Love you!
A.I.D** xoxoxoox

Aww Luanne, that was such a beautiful poem. I still remember my first kiss. I'm still dating the girl who gave it to me. We also shared out passionate kisses. Hmm, wedding seems a bit far from now, but maybe one day. Aww such a sweet poem. The ending was sad though :( Loved this poem!

Such a sad poem. However, It flowed well with a great message. Very well done, indeed.

Damn! Your poetry gets better and better. This is a powerful piece. Beautifully done.

Beneath many the midnight sky

^^^ maybe it should be beneath many A midnight sky...i dunno...i just think so :)
its a really beautiful poem...of how love is eternal, and the progression of love through the ages...and how sometimes the elements of lust in love transform to pure, crystalline love. I loved it!