Falling hood

by xxmichaelxx   Aug 9, 2006


Black hood
mixed up mood
black sweater
life hater
black hair
feeling she wants to bare
always wear a heart pin
1 year she's been
like this
no kiss, no bliss
her life, it's all messed up
this rage inside, no one can stop
she cries before she sleeps
memories she keeps
day and night
she's wrong, she's right
she stays strong
don't know for how long
she's crazy
she's lazy
she's a hypocrite
in her left wrist, there's a slit
she's fake
all these lies she make
no one trust her
she's not a keeper
she's not a goth
she's just always have a wroth
she likes the color black
it shows she doesn't have any luck
it show that she's sad and always angry
but even though she tries to get attention, no one can see
are they blind?
that they can't find
her true feelings inside
she wants someone by her side
but no one will replace the empty spot
because she loves him a lot
she's tries everything she could
she's falling hood

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  • 17 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    Another great poem yet again! (I'm gonna run out of things to say soon lol)

  • 17 years ago

    by eternalxxpromise

    Wow awesome poem.
    keep up the good work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Poison Ivy

    WOW!..very well described.im sure you have described many of us in this poem!.way to go..keep it up :)

  • 17 years ago

    by SilenceBreaksTheHeart

    I really loved this one...I can really relate to it. It is deffinately one of my favorites. You did an amazing job on this one...I can see that your talent for poetry is growing, great job.
    5.5
    Breanna

  • 17 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Wow thts really good...i can really relate 2 tht.....keep on writin!!! and ill comment on ur poems!!