Simple Goodbye

by Lauren Waszkiewicz   Aug 10, 2006


Mutter a word
a simple good bye
something to hint that
theres a soul behind your eyes

just look away
with a distant stare
how hard's a goodbye
a simple way to show you care?

drop me off at this clinic
leave me here to die
forget me at this prison
don't bother to say goodbye

get up and turn
begin to walk away
now a goodbye
is what you'll never hear me say

This is a poem kinda based on the book 'cut'
only different b/c in cut the girl doesn't talk but in my poem its the mother. but what ever.

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  • 17 years ago

    by amoxi

    This was a wonderful poem very dep and heartfelt i liked it a lot

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    Ha! Loved it. I think the only thing you can do for this is to use some puncuation. Capitalize things and us commas and periods. You know crap like that. :) But other than that, I loved it! I loved this part the best though :P

    drop me off at this clinic
    leave me here to die
    forget me at this prison
    don't bother to say goodbye

    Excellent

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kurt

    Great poem, I'm sure that if I took the time to read every one of your poems I would not be disappointed. Congrats on being such an inspiring poet.

  • 17 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Wow nice nice work! i loved the emotion and it really painted a picture, loved it! 5/5

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