The Demon Inside

by LovelyDivine   Aug 11, 2006


Looking into these eyes,
You see the demon inside,
Waiting to unleash itself.
Better watch out for your health,
This demon's ready to attack.
It's looking for a midnight snack,
To fill it's need of hunger.
It won't wait much longer.

The time has finally come,
She will make you eternally numb.
Run far, far away,
Until night turns to day,
Then she'll go into hiding.
When night comes again,
She's on her search for men.
So be careful who you look in the eye,
Cause there could be a demon inside.

*** I don't think this is the greatest, but it just came to me out of nowhere.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    To fill it's need of hunger.
    It won't wait much longer.

    These lines are beautifully worded and even flows well. Overall this poem is great.

    Tc
    Fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I like it, but I think that you should change the word "snack" in the first stanza, it sounds somehow childish. (I don't want to offend you, that's just my opinion). The rest of the poem is amazing and very powerful, the second stanza especially.

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    It is very interesting. First stanza could be better. I like the topic and I like message of this piece.

  • 17 years ago

    by Drew

    I think that those are the best when they come to you, you don`t have to think it`s just there waiting to be written. great poem as always 5/5
    Drew

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