by Synh Aug 14, 2006
category :
Life, society /
about society
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I look in at me |
by kiara
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Omg this is exactly how im feeling right now but now i want 2 find who i was becoz i luvd it n otha pplz did 2 but now i cant find who i used 2 be n it scars me |
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Good poem! Alot of people can relate to it! Good job 5/5 |
by Aline
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Bt still u didnt show us whoat did the world do to u? accident?burned?trying to be someone ur not.this is a great poem i liked a lot, but u missed something. 4/5 |
by Darien
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Hmm, this was an interesting poem, and instead of giving you advice or moral support or whatever, I'll just comment on the poem. I thought it was good, I just thought you rhyme the word 'me' too many times. |
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The girl I witness |