Theism {Pleiades}

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   Aug 14, 2006


Twist and turn
This is where angels burn.
Their testimon rings in your ears.
Truth beyond all our fears
Thrives within their carcass.
Theism is broken like glass;
This is where the angels burn.

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Pleiades:

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  • 19 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Love it, very deep and powerful poem. Great job adding angels in.

  • 19 years ago

    by catdogbilly

    Cool poem

  • 19 years ago

    by -The-Undying-

    That was an amazing {Pleiades}. I have never heard of one before but it really captured me.
    This is where angels burn. was my favorite line, im off to read more!

  • 19 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Wow.. That was absolutely amazing. I've never heard of that type of poem before, but you did a great job on this. The flow of it was really good, and the whole poem in general was very different. The last line gave me chills for some reason. Great job on this! 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Kyra

    Hey cool i didnt know that poems could be written like that but yea cool i liked it alot.
    ~Kyra~

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