Tears [Etheree]

by Nelle   Aug 18, 2006

I cried
All for you
Until the end
You took my hand then
And said, let's play pretend
You picked me up when I fell
You showed me that your love was real
I need you more then I ever did
Come with me and together we will be

The poetry form, Etheree, consists of 10 lines of 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10 syllables.


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  • 13 years ago

    by robin milford

    Beautiful poem love to hear from u hun

  • 13 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Wow i like this... not too long but meaningful for me and deeply touch my heart, this is great! 5/5

    god bless!

  • 13 years ago

    by -The-Undying-

    You showed me that your love was real
    That was another good poem although not exactly something different from all the rest yet original at the same time :S?!

  • 13 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awwhh, that was so sweeet! I loved it! The flow was good, and your descriptions were so full of love.. Wonderful job hunny! 5/5

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