That Night I Remember

by Bhavin   Aug 18, 2006


I was alone on that eerie night
A night that represented fear and fright
There was no joy, there was no fun
To give me company there was none
So I chose to follow a path that led
Inside the room and I sat on the bed
I opened the window and gazed at a star
Which beamed at me and shone from far.

A silly wish made my mind rock
I wished it was somebody to whom I could talk
So I joined my hands and closed my eyes
To tell some things, in my mind that lies
Suddenly my senses replied back
And made me realise that stars don't talk back
So I smiled at myself for thinking too deep
I lied on the bed and went to sleep.

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Sorry friends, this poem might sound kiddish. But this is the actual feeling that comes to my mind when I feel lonely and depressed. I am sure, you too think about the same thing. The only difference between us is that your feelings go silent and flow away like tears and my feelings gather and take the form of poetic words...

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  • 17 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    I loved the way it flowed and all made sense. :)

  • Once again i know this came from your heart...its not childish or silly...its what u feel and iam sure many other does..for i myself feel like this all the time...i do talk to the stars and the moon...they don't and never reply but i do feel closer to it...i hae felt like this so many nights that the thought of day was impossible...thank u for sharing this poem...i loved it...