Your love [Cinquain]

Lol this is different because it's so simple. Most cinquains I've read are about the great existance of nature, seasons and life habbits, instead of sweet love.
Normally something like this would be erm cliche...but it worked, especially the 8 syllable line.
Oh and I found your forgetfulness amusing and somewhat a relief (you forgot the titles to request comments on) I'm just the same...like a goldfish in terms of short term memory, yet strangely, my long term is great....
Anyway, thanks for sharing.

Short and sweet. Good job

And made my sad feelings happy
that wus my favorite line! this was great for a short poem

Awh, this was quite sweet.. I felt that the first two lines were better than the rest.. In the third line, I don't like the word "better" maybe you could change that.. And I didn't really like the third line, I found it a little immature.. Other than that, great job hun! 4/5