Try {Lanturne}

by Natalie   Aug 20, 2006


-------------God,
----------Believes,
-------We'll succeed,
---------Only if we,
-------------Try.

20th August 2006
Copyright (C) Natalie.

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Lanturne: A type of poetry in which when
it is centered, it resembles the Japanese
lantern. It has a strict syllable pattern of 1, 2, 3, 4, 1.
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  • 17 years ago

    by Hind

    Nice poem...veryy well put together...5-5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    I love the message given in this poem! wonderful Lanturne as well. i love how this poems are so short and have so few words in them and yet they speak wuch powerful things. great job.

    ~Jacklyn

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awwh, that was awesome hunny! The words you used were perfect and all fitted in the syllable counts.. You said so much in such a few words.. Wonderful work hunny, Ily! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Basic concept, very true.

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    That was a great write Nat!!! Very inspirational! That something I don't read often in poems. Good stuff SMAWCE sister!!

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