I miss you

by xxbabigrrlxx   Aug 21, 2006


I hide my tears under a smile
Breaking hearts is so vile
I miss your lips
and your eyes
your arms that held me when i cried
I want to hold you till the sky comes falling down
Kiss you in the moonlight till we drown
I love you
but you don't love me
Why can't you open your eyes and see that we're meant to be????

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  • 17 years ago

    by BSV

    I like this poem alot ... and i just wrote the poem today ....during class... i and yeah it did happen to me and but the way you really good at writing poems

    brad

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awh.. That was really sad.. The flow was a little off as the lines were different lenghts.. Other than that, the descriptions were beautiful and the emotion clear.. Nice job 4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Oo lala...this poem was sad. Like one of those tragic love poems. You had a couple nice rhymes too. And I hope it's not true and if it is...i hope you get over that person soon.

    Hey if you could, I would really appreciate it if you commented on my poems. Take Care

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