Thanks For Killing Me

by TeenXLoveXTragedy   Aug 26, 2006


Please comment...i need dont know what to do and i need help

I think it was
the way you smiled
something about it
drove me wild

The touch of your hand
your voice in my ear
softly whispering
what i need to hear

You killed me slowly
I dont know how to start
With your amazing words
you stole my heart

You left me speachless
every single day
not konwing what to do
not caring what i say

The whole time
I never hid my love
I thought you were my angel
sent from up above

The whole time you lied
and you didnt care
but inside i died
a feeling of despair

Sitting her now
pouring out my heart
I want to explain how much i care
but i dont know how to start

Ill be like you
and not even try
carve your name on my wrist
and simply die

ill leave you alone
you dont need to know
how bad you hurt me
that ill never let you go

There are things i will forget
like all the lies and cheating
everytime i hear your name
my heart just stops beating

When i said i loved you
I swear i didnt lie
and i didnt lie when i said
for you i would die

you broke my heart
as you can clearly see
now i have to tell you thanks..
thanks for killing me

sorry if its not that great..it was just kind of a vent that ive been needing

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  • 16 years ago

    by TillyMariex

    Wow. that was rrly good. i also kno how you feel. again wow. i like it. its cute and deep. <333

  • 16 years ago

    by FromHeroToZero

    Hi.
    Love your poem, and I can really relate to what you're feeling. You just have to get over him , I know it's hard but there's just no other cure. I'm not going to tell you these stupid things like that you have to look for another guy, cause I realize you just can't and that forgetting him is impossible. Kinda going through the same. Mail me anytime.
    :) greats x

  • 16 years ago

    by Misus3d.N.Abus3d

    You are my favorite author so far and u jus keep amazing me with every word, and i been therre recently, breath...if its meant they will come bacc...promise.

  • 16 years ago

    by katie

    This is absolutely amazing. i loved it.

  • 17 years ago

    by melody

    Wow. yeah i know how u feel. its happened to me before. the guy says all the right things, u think he's one of the good ones, he gives you the look that makes u crazy about him, than u fall for him, u think u can't live without him. i'm not gunna lie it took me a while to get over it. i still don't think i'm completly over it. just try to open ur eyes to other guys. you never know who could be waiting for u to just run into his arms.

    c/b