by Twisted Heart Aug 27, 2006
category :
Fun, humor /
other
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I hear the car door, then I hear her leave |
by Lu
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This brought back some memories of my childhood .... |
by Midnight Sun
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LOL! Really good...great mindset for this one...keep up the great work. 5/5 |
by C Cattaway
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Lol.. very true.. Oh, to be younger.. maybe I should get my boys to read this!!!! Well done.. xx |
by Tormented
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Awwww thats so cute! nice laugh! nice read! nice poem! nice flow! nice rhyme! nice evrything! 5/5 |
by Adriana77
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This is really cute! Keep it up! |