Shining Golden Rays [Haiku]

by Jessica   Aug 29, 2006


Slowly peaking out
Golden rays of sunlight shine
Dazzling us with hope
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Haiku:
Japanese style short poem of 3 lines, about nature or with a seasonal theme. Syllable count of 5-7-5.

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  • 16 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    I love it. I like the theme of sunshine just around the corner, about to make everybody so very happy.

    Very cute. A lot expressed in the most simplistic lines.

    Good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by sчиτнєτι¢__x.

    Woweee-- Jessy! This was a great haiku! Loved the middle line, it was simply beautiful! Keep it up hun! 5/5

    Natalie``

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Not too bad... As I said, I don't really like Haiku's, but you do them beautifully. Good job.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

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