Two Years Too Late
by The Lonely Rose Aug 31, 2006
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Two Years To Late.. |
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17 years ago
by Esther
That is so sad! n as i read the emotion just washed over me!!!
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17 years ago
by Goran Rahim
A very sad one, but once again it showes your great talent.
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17 years ago
by Amber Dawn
That was really but..and it was sad but it was very very super duper lovely! keep up the good work! *gives you 10 stars*
love ya always
~Amber Dawn~ -
17 years ago
by *Isolde*
Wow that was such a sad poem. It was really nice. keep it up.
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17 years ago
The poem was alright but it did feel a bt rushed. It had the things that a poem needs: Message, good flow, tragic love, but the fact that you more or less narrate the poem is what felt off about it. It could be just me. The rest of the poem was decent. Also it's two not to in your final line.
