I Totally Give Up

Will I continue onto this journey?
Will I survive the years?
Will I become one?
This is all I wonder,
And these are questions I battle with.
Will I be able to carry
My tattered self,

and

Will all my mistakes
Fall down like bombs
For me to battle with?
All alone?
Face to face
A thousand to one?
Will my legs grow weak,
My eyes be come tired,
And my voice die in a horase?
My tears will crust down my face,
And my lips will begin to crack.

Are great how you put worded it!

I loved it. I love your writing!

This is really, good, yet again so much emotion! i love it, thank u for the comment...im gonna add u to my faves xxx..bye

Hey really sad, bt great poem, i hope its not you thinking of giving up on life, if u need 2 talk im here kk?
love mel

Very good emotions in this piece. Many poems with so many questions don't turn out being so good, but i really enjoyed this one. You vented your thoughts very good. Keep it up! 5/5 =D