That Girl(did you notice?)

by Suri dawn   Sep 6, 2006


I can see that girl sitting under the blossom tree.
Yes,but did you notice who she is?
That girl is wearing a beautiful white dress.
Yes,but did you notice she was saving it for her wedding day?
That girl has beautiful blue eyes.
Yes,but did you notice they stare blankly?
That girl has a flawless complexion.
Yes,but did you notice it has gone pale?
That girl has a perfect model's body.
Yes,but did you notice it lies still?
That girl's lips have never been kissed.
Yes,but did you notice they went cold?
That girl's hair blows so ellegantly in the wind.
Yes,but did you notice the streak of blood where she placed her bullet?
That girl's a suicide.
Yes,but did you notice you're that girl?

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  • 17 years ago

    by xxMagioxx

    Wow really nice poem there, I can sooooooooo relate, thxs for commenting on my poems ill read your others in a sec :)

    Tony :D love ya :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Landon Carter

    Very powerful and sad. I can notice a broken heart and those wet eyes Telling me something. Keep writing and share your imagination with us. 5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Excellent poem. I love the repetition in it. It was very powerful and was wonderfully written. 5/5. Great Job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Lutu

    Wow! That was amazing...I almost cried in the end...great job! Keep it up!