Sea of pure light

by Corruption   Sep 17, 2006


There is someone that i would like to explain to you
and I'm sorry but i can't say who
but i yearn to see her
i dream of her every night

she is like a sea of pure light
and i compliment her with all my might
but still my words do not come close
to explaining how beautiful she is

as to be expected she doesn't believe me
she says says i lie, that her beauty cannot be
but as i gaze as her picture i see this beauty
and i wish that she will never leave my sight

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  • 17 years ago

    by Alissa

    LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!! If I were you I'd scream out my poems and let everyone bow down to my i'l-sotalented-in-writing-poems-ness

  • 17 years ago

    by WordsHurt

    Nice poem!Just one critique i saw:
    but as i gaze as her picture i see this beauty
    (But as i gaze AT her picture I see this Beauty)
    It flowed well and there was a lil rhyme there! I enjoyed reading it! Keep up the GREAT work!
    And
    Keep Smiling

    Much Love
    -*-DK-*-
    PS: Who is it? lol jking