Disappointed [Tetractys]

by Tammie   Sep 17, 2006


Alone
She walks
Head hung low
Disappointed
In people she thought she could rely on.

* This is my first Tetractys. I'm not sure if its any good. Thought I'd put it up anyway. *

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Tetractys consists of at least 5 lines of 1, 2, 3, 4, 10 syllables (total of 20).

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  • 19 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Hrrrmmm. I love it. Very nicely written for being your first one of this type. I enjoyed it your wording was very nice and it made the poem amazing. :]]

  • 19 years ago

    by FlirtingWithDeath

    I always have trouble doing Tetractys poems, you did a wonderful job 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Biscuit

    Im not very familiar with the specs of a tetractys, not that that matters! you've really captured great emotion in just a few words. great job.

  • 19 years ago

    by Misstress

    Very sad poem indeed, thought provoking..

    God Bless!

  • 19 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Very well done, i really like it, 5/5

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