I Love You More

by Christie   Sep 23, 2006


With shaking hands and a tremor in her voice,
She voiced her intense pain,
She knew that soon the cancer would win,
She'd never see this world again.

As her husband knelt beside her bed,
With tears streaming down his face,
He told her he loved her with all his heart,
And could never be replaced.

The frail, small women in her death bed,
Said sweetie, its you I adore,
I don't care how much you say you love me,
I will always love you more.

An old argument from their teenage years,
A meaningful yet fun game,
They'd use any means to prove they'd won,
An everlasting dispute it became.

For their 30 years of happy marriage,
It seemed to go so fast,
Of all the times he'd argued his love,
This would be the very last.

Through his tears, he said goodbye,
He'd never done this with ease,
He'd always hated the time she'd leave,
Even if only for a week.

He knew he was saying goodbye for ever,
Never to see her again,
It left him unable to speak a word,
He was consumed by her intense pain.

He bent down and kissed her head,
Remembering all she'd been,
Remembering their wedding day,
And how they'd met at 15.

With so much love in his heart,
He looked to the woman he knew,
She asked him to get her more morphine,
Slowly from the room he withdrew.

He didn't realise that this moment of pain,
Was her body finally giving way,
Before the dark consumed her being,
She said what she'd wanted to say,

Though not heard by her husband,
The man she loved and adored,
Alone, in pain, she used her last breath,
To exhale, 'I love you more'.

© Christie 2006

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  • 17 years ago

    by Savanha

    OMG wow.. you definately had me in tears...
    and the ending was magnificient.
    you are an amazing writer!

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by AnnMarie

    O' wow! That poem is so good. It brought tears to my eyes just at the mere thought of losing my own love. The emotions were so intense, the flow was wonderful. It was an excellent poem!

    -AnnMarie

  • 17 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    Incredible!! Brought me to tears, as VERY few poems ever really do! So much raw emotion, so much pain...so much devastating reality and possibilities...God...it was so beautiful!!!! Amazing write! Best I've read in over a year, which is a really good compliment if I do say so myself! Thanks for encouraging me to read it!!

  • 17 years ago

    by MorbidCupcake

    Wow thts so sad.... It made me cry.
    Very Very well written 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by jordynn

    Awe. really deep. i love it.