Once Over

by Katlynn   Sep 24, 2006


So you make another mistake.
where do i go to shake,
the hand the man who killed me.
the man who broke me down.
more && more each day.
with a twice of a dozen times.
give me a dime.
tell me what time it is.
pick heads or tails.

watch me drop dead.
in the voice of yours.
watch me drop from blood.
taking out of me.
the way you cut me inside.
yeah, believe it or not.
it kills more then doing it.

yeah this is not what you think.
so lets all sink.
to the bottom of the ocean.
tell each other what we think of both.

lets sing a song for last time.
before we sin && die.
so kill me out of rage.
kill me out of faith.
yeah this is random.
yeah this might not be a poem.
but i have to get it all out.
i need to shout.
but they all would hear me.
don't you see.

I'm not pissed anymore.
I'm not a closed door.
talk to me before i leave it.
before i walk out && lock it.
let me know what you think.
let me know your feelings.

lets tell a lie instead.
that'll make me feel better.
wait.
you already have.
now look where i am.
making something up.
that isn't important && doesn't make sense.

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  • 17 years ago

    by ForeverYoung

    This really isnt your best poem, the rhyming was really shaky and the flow didnt really uh... flow?!

    Sorry to be harsh.

    also watch the puntuaction and capital letter.

    3/5

    ~Murder.

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Very emotional peom but great wording choices, i enjoyed it, great job. 5/5 from me.

  • 17 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This is a bold self expression with a touch of humility.. yeah this might not be a poem.
    but i have to get it all out.
    i need to shout

    The poem reads like a rap but I am not narrow minded when it comes to poetry do you feel me?

    I feel the emotion expressed in this poem so I believe you hit your mark

    In others words I believe the poem delivered the affect the author desired