I enjoyed this a lot. It was very moving and felt so real at the same time. 5/5

Nice job, though I would say this poem doesn't exact go into the nature section. Nice use of descriptions and imagery. The first stanza had great flow. The second stanza was a bit off. Keep it up

This is truely an excellent poem, I really like it a lot. Great imagery you have created with your words. 5/5 from me, great work.

If you would, please comment and rate on my poem 'Shadows of your Heart'. Thanks! :)

You are an amazing poet! All your poems have wonderful flow

Wow that was an amazing poem! i kept me on the edge of my seat the whole time. it wa actually captivating which is hard to find in a poem these days. i wanted her to live but her dying made it better. u really worded it right. great job yet again! u made it to my favorites! 5/5

Great poem... i loved the emotion keep up the good work 5/5

Wonderful, the imagery and flow kept me moving through the poem the whole way. I loved the story line and the way you put it together. Talent, I say.

I liked it a lot. But I also say it shouldn't go in the nature section. =P It has more than just nature in it. It has triumph, power, will and emotion in it. I'd probably put it under sad or dark poems. But that's totally up to you. =)

I liked the structure of this. It was like reading a book. Of a death. Lol. I liekd the way you used personification for the ocean. It made the poem have fantastic imagery, and full of imagination. Great job. =) 5/5 xxoo

Samantha

This outstanding poem could have been posted in many categories yet it does have much natural imagery in it I was captivated by the thought provoking story, and very impresses with the flow

Excellent job again. Nice flow. I know that this poem does talk about the ocean, but I don't think it completely belongs in the nature section. Keep it up

Although thhe imagery was clear I don't feel this piece picked up the pace until the end.
I loved the final stanza though as it summed up the beguiling nature of the ocean perfectly.

Wow. this poem was superb! the ending was amazing, i felt as though it was me who was the next victim. you did a wonderful job on making me feel like i was there. 5/5

That was an EXCELLENT poem. i couldnt take my eyes off the screan. IT WAS WONDERFUL. there was nothing wrong with it. 5/5

Kalee

This ones awesome hun. it flowed perfectly.
much love and many kisses,
bex

To me I didn't think it should go into the nature category even though it has a nature effect over it, just seems to of been better placed somewhere else. Not that, that matters!. Overall a gorgeous poem. Truely stunning and an enjoyable read. Keep up the good work.~mel

Terifying insite, very dramatic, I don't understand the part about how she can't see? why would she not be able to see anymore? was she never able to see? it just pops out to me because its the only part that doesn't seem to fit, Otherwise its a really well writen poem :) Great Job

5/5