What's Become of Me

I'm still working on this one..would appreciate comments and thoughts! Thanks!

Under the moonlit sky
In the cool autumn breeze
I stare upon the stars
And wonder what's become of me

So bitter and so twisted
What's become of me?
Blinded by the anger
Hurt by reality

What's going on?
I don't know who am
I've given up on myself
And I don't give a damn

Turned to the bottle
Ravaged my soul
Complete loss of feeling
I've lost all control

I walk this world numb
A hollowed out corpse
My heart is empty
And my mind is warped

Bruised and battered
I surrender to the pain.
I'm off to a better place
To live my life again.