Time will tell
by Letty Sep 30, 2006
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It only takes a little time for the truth to unfold. All that was once in the dark comes to light for all, of the world to behold. |
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17 years ago
Over all a nice poem but while reading there awere many things i thought needed work-
* you need to add breaks in the stanzas, at the end of each line and commas to the breaks/pauses in each line. ex- The evil in all will be exposed, for the kind and caring to see. (or whereever the pause is. im not sure exactly where it is)
* Check the sentence structure. a few lines were confusing and gard to understand because of grammatical errors and problems with sentence stucture. i think you should go through and read the poem over slowly reading each line seperatly.(sp?).
* also in the last stanza patients-patience. and the second line needs work, irs a run on sentence..
Overall Good, not great poem.
4/5
x.x:Lauren -
17 years ago
by UnToLd TrUtH
This is a great poem. Loved the way it flowed. 5/5
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17 years ago
Wow! great poem! i dont know what to say. SO powerful, your really getting a valuable message through here. My favourite stanza it the 2cd. i love the way you have this sort of revenge, on those who lie and decieve in this poem.
5/5
Love Mel -
17 years ago
by Jessica
Wow, this was good.. It was very meaningful and the idea worked well.. Your descriptions were good as was the flow and emotion.. Nicely done! 5/5
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17 years ago
They say, might makes right. No no. Right makes might, it just takes a little longer.... This poem reminds me of a quote that goes something like that. again, well written, and another 5/5.
