Sorrowful Tears

by LuvMeAlwayz   Oct 1, 2006


Dripping of droplets
Fall onto the roof,
Like disintegrated jets
Fall upon as proof.

It poured its sorrow
Upon the land.
Because cupid's arrow
Landed on the wrong man.

Streaming hot droplets
Rolling off her cheeks,
A fresh wound set
Where comfort she seeks.

His words haunted her in her dreams
Hiding herself is what it seems,
Softly saying it will be all right
Wonder if god would know her plight.

Drifting away from her fears
Closing her eyes from silent tears
Feeling weak and off she goes
Off to somewhere, no one knows.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    God = God

    What in the world have you been doing then? These are well written. You're not even using ellipsis' or making any mistakes with your words. The last two poems I've read have been that way. But the first three were almost horrid with all the mistakes and such.

    Maybe you need to re-read and edit the newer ones you write a bit more. Because these here are much better than the newer ones.

  • 19 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    Awsome poem....well said...i don't know what eles to say...this poem is so fliping amazing...each word goes so well with the next word...GREAT job!!!
    auna

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