Line of Life

Misstress,
I have read your poem...
Your words and expressions are powerful.
And the most beautiful part is, that it is constructive...it gives hope...to our failures of life...that we never wish...but remind us of our reality...and perhaps also define that we are humans at the end...and not Gods...I will read more of your poems...5/5

Beautiful poem hun! I coudn't have wrote it any better myself. I had to read this twice. Not because I didn't understand, but because I loved it so much the first time that I read it. lol. You have shared your wonderful talent again for all to see. Thank you 5/5

Love
Letty

Another thought-provoking write---Amazing piece...I started reading and was totally captivated by the way you wrote the poem--I'm definately adding you to my favorites; I love your work---5/5

What can i say 5/5

I really like this. It's different to what i usually read i think, and i like it alot. I like poems about life, and you have much talent in writing them. After reading the last part of this poem especially about the Circle of Life, i was in awe. I just said wow, and i don't have words to describe the talent and intellegence you have to write something so good. It has got me thinking, and i think that is the best ending to a poem. It's very clever. An excellent write. Please keep it up, you have such talent! =] 5/5 - If only i could rate higher, i would.

Tammie xo