Present Thoughts of Past Times

by Laura   Oct 4, 2006


All I ever wanted was to be considered the best of friends
Instead using each other differently as a means to an ends
I honestly miss your genuine camaraderie
Feeling as though I have lost a small part of me

When I am reminiscing about the good old days
When we used to unwind smoking big fat J's
Evenings of debates spent analyzing our lives
Those were the days when it was all good vibes

There was never a time when you needed to pretend
I had always thought that you would be a close friend
From my first impression I thought that you were one of a kind
What held you back from being honest and speaking your mind?

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  • 17 years ago

    by PS

    I love the idea and i can feel the emotion. but some of the rhyming seems forced. but i think candamerie, me. also the flow is sort of awkward because some lines are much longer or shorter that the ones around it to account for the rhyme. but nice job! i definetly enjoyed it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Sarah

    This poem is really wicked. Good Job Dude.

  • 17 years ago

    by Bogie

    Dang!!! Girl, I must say you took
    me back thru my childhood buddys
    and remembered my best friend Kelly,
    whom I have known since grade school
    and has been my flying partner since
    we were in the fifth grade. We have not
    been out to the flying field in about two
    years now and thanks to you its time for
    that phone call. Thank you for sharing
    this heartwarming read and Write On,
    Bogie

  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Dude Laura...I am just in love with your friendship poems seriously...your rhymes are always different from the usuals we read here on pnq which is why its always refreshing to read your work! AHh I just looked up and saw katie just said that!

    ANyways Love..great to have you writing again its a bonus for me to read some amazing work from you after a long hard day at school! MWah
    Love ya Laur, this was awesome!
    Chels

  • 17 years ago

    by katie!

    CONGRATULATIONS.. on breaking the writers block.. took me forever too! Well done, and you sure as hell broke it!

    "When I am reminiscing about the good old days
    When we used to unwind smoking big fat J's"

    Those lines made me laugh haha.. sounds like a good time to me.. I really understood the meaning of this poem and I could relate to it..

    A million times better than

    I luv u chantelle
    swear u dnt smell
    we r frends
    til da end

    Great friendship poem, very refreshing to see!
    xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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