I Wasn't Even His.

by Sarah Ann   Oct 7, 2006


The scenery was so perfect
A blistery but peaceful night
He took me in his arms, we cuddled,
But I wasn't even his.

He whispered sweet words.
I felt destined to his beauty and fate
I saw desire when he looked into my eyes
My heart went thump, and fell.

I stumbled over and he caught me
He already had my heart, my soul
Oh! what a thief. Didn't I know he would be?
And I wasn't even his.

How insanely rude, I thought.
He gently touched my cheeks, smiling
But I felt as if a feather rubbed down my spine
I was shaking. I felt loved.

In response I tried to say something.
I couldn't.
"Love isn't for me" I wanted to scream
Instead, he kissed me.

The world spun and fell apart,
Then there was only us.
The Earth stood whole for two.
I was dizzy. I felt sick.

He pulled away and smiled
How I let him take full control, I don't know
But the butterflies distracted me,
And I wasn't even his.

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  • 17 years ago

    by LiveForHim

    Wow *tear drop* the poem is so unique and heartfelt. i truly understand what you are going for. keep it up, i like what im seeing.

  • 17 years ago

    by SECRET

    M i too small to understand this?..co'z i cannot understand all..only half of them i can!!..

    somone please explain!!..

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    Amazing! I can understand why so far you have gotten a 5/5 ... no rhyming i like rhyming... but yours didnt need it! Everything was perfect! I love the emotion i got from this.. simply amazing! fav stanza:
    He pulled away and smiled
    How I let him take full control, I don't know
    But the butterflies distracted me,
    And I wasn't even his.

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by catherine

    I liked it. It was one that I felt everyone could relate to, which means great writting!

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    "And I wasn't even his"
    wow, a wonderful write, i see a tone of sadness in it, but written so greatly..
    nothing less than a 5/5 from me.
    keep up the great job

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