Nothing but a dream...

by Fairytales   Oct 9, 2006


I love the way you say my name,
and look into my eyes,
I love how you always seem to
cringe when we say our good byes.

I love the things you say and do
that makes me smile and laugh,
I love the way you always say that
I'm your other half.

But most of all I love how you
seem to brighten up my day,
And how you always tell me you love me,
even though there's other things to say.

I love the way you
point at me, and tell your other friends,
"Yea, she's the girl that I'll be with
till the very end.

You're just too good to be true,
too perfect for me, it seems...
Oh right, I totally forgot,
It was nothing but a dream...

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  • 17 years ago

    by Dre4meR

    Awww...very sweet writing...i enjoyed reading your poem...keep up the good work...:D

  • 17 years ago

    by tictac

    Awwww i can sooooo relate 2 that i swear omg that poem wat it says 2 me is that we all at sumtime have to face reality even in a dream! luv yazz bie

  • 17 years ago

    by clumzy

    I like this poem its good when you have time go check out my poem and see if they are good hope you like them

  • 17 years ago

    by A Christoffer

    I really liked this poem and it was really sweet but i think you could have done with out the last stanza. this poem is a feel good poem and that last little twist isnt a happy one. its a mix of emotions that doesnt feel good. great poem though, formatically speaking. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    I was like...well this was happier than the other poems until I read the ending. Sad, and you did a good job expressing it. Jpoet*

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