Kitty and his Crew

by Bradley Peter   Oct 9, 2006


Tipple topple off the block
The kitty cat says its two o'clock
'Time it flies', he does say
'We must make haste, come this way'

'Follow me, I know the path
Which we'll travel by magic bath
Lets get in, and on our way
Come on, come on, lets not delay'

The kitty jumped straight on board
Holding an umbrella as his sword
But Dog and Mouse weren't so sure
To sail a bath across the shore

'Maybe Dog and I should stay
Or follow on a later day'
'Nonsense, this is the test of time
Follow me in silly rhyme'

Slowly Dog and Mouse got on
And in a flash all four were gone
With all their lives is kitty's paws
And the bath that broke so many laws...

* I apologies if this poem seems a little crap, but I write the first stanza and had to write more...sadly this is the best I could come up with, lol.*

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  • 17 years ago

    by Brigitte

    Awe this is a really cute poem! I love your writting style and the cute little tale you told, except the last line didn't make much sence... why was a bath breaking laws???

  • 17 years ago

    by Roxy

    LOL.
    this made me laugh a bit lol.
    I love the rythming its great and you used your imagination i loved how you made the kitty sail across a bath LOL.
    xoxroxyxox

  • 17 years ago

    by steffff

    [hehe]
    this makes me giggle.
    :] you did a great job on keeping up the rhyming.funny poems are hard to write, but you did a good job
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kelly

    Hey
    This isnt crap. Anything that gives people a giggle is good and i thought this poem was superb! 5/5

    Kelly
    xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Bethan

    I think u shuld u continue dis story cos it plays on ur playful side dat u really dnt explore enuff durin dis story and is def. in nursery rhyme style. I luv it iits jus fun and interestin and v.childish lol. it appeals 2 a whole new side 2 ur character dat poems and quotes aint seen yet!!!
    Love you,
    XxXxX

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