See through man

by just a little girl   Oct 9, 2006


No one can see him
no one can hear him
no one understands his pain
no one sees the see through man

no one listens to him
no one to talk to him
no one holds his hand
no one sees the see through man

no one helps him
no one loves him
no one will help him cope
no one sees the see through man

everyone ignores him
everyone hates him
everyone will pass him by
will we ever see the see through man?

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  • 17 years ago

    by A Christoffer

    Confusing. i liked it but if i think if u went more into the metaphor of a "see through man" it would have made it more interesting. good poem though. i liked the format and the repetiotion. it was good.

  • 17 years ago

    by candi

    I liked this poem... 5/5 you did a great job.

  • 17 years ago

    by ForeverYoung

    Wow! such a poewerful poem!
    I really like the way you refered to him as 'the see through man'
    great job 5/5

    ~Murder.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    Wow great job on this. i really like the imagination in it about the "see through man". great job! 5/5

    ~Kristina

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