by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere Oct 11, 2006
category :
Life, society /
patriotism
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**READ:: This poem is in memory of my brother David. He vanished and we're afriad he has died. The begining is what he had as his song to keep him going. SO IF YOU DONT LIKE IT DONT COMMENT ON IT~** |
by Ashla
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GREAT! I LOVE THIS POEM. AND IM SORRY YOUR BROTHER WENT MISSING. |
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That was an excellent song! it really had a good flow to it and i have a beat in my head that would fit perfectly for it! great write! i hope u find ur bro! 5/5 |
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Nice xxx |
by Dumpstead
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Good job; ). It could have been much better if you had spent more time I guess. |
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This is a very intense poem iI am sure it would inspire courage and confidence in a soldier |