I dont understand

by Brittany C   Oct 11, 2006


The things you say,
The way you act,
Are just a few things,
That I like about you,

Your not like the other guys,
I have never known anyone to be so kind,
But what do you think of me,
I do not know,
You gave me some reasons,
But I don't see why any one would like me,

I am not pretty or smart,
I have never done anything that has mad a difference to the world,
So why are you so willing to be there for me,
And to love me,

You are always saying that my hair is beautiful,
And that I'm smart,
And look good in anything I wear,
I just don't see it,
What is it about me that you like so much,

I have hardly any friends,
I don't talk much,
I really don't see it,
So why don't you tell me,
Why don't you give me a reason why, You like to be around me,
I just don't know.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    One mistake
    3rd Stanza 2nd line mad should be made

    other than that this is perfect. The flow fantastic, the word choice awesome, the emtion poweful, and real, perfectly penned amazing 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    This poem is really sweet, it reminds my of my baby :D, he saved me from bad things and i mean bad. I dont know why to this day. Its really nice to know someone cares that much

    xxx alex xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Okay the flow was way off try counting your syllabols it would sound a lot better! Other then that I think you did an okay job on this not one of your best

  • 17 years ago

    by ALEX

    Beautiful poem, great emotion. awesome job.

    5/5

    Parker

  • 17 years ago

    by Chris Rodriguez

    Sweet, smart, and to be honest a little silly. If this is a confession all I can say is go for it. A boy doesn't say those things if he's not telling the truth, we are very black and white. The reason can be nothing at all. Absoluteley nothing can be the strongest reason why love exists. When you say you can't see it, I think it represents fear, doubt, and realization of the fact that what is happening is true. Very nice poem it got me thinking, about my own situations too. Peace.

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