Pull Me To Heaven

by Letty   Oct 14, 2006


I dream of a golden throne surrounded by angels.

I dream of soft and sweet angelic music streaming from a golden harp.

I dream of pure white clouds that are softer then down pillows.

I dream of beautiful lambs grazing in the meadow.

I can smell the sweet smell of milk and honey and I can almost taste it too.

I see beautiful people of all ages, shapes, and sizes floating in white robes.

Everyone is smiling and they even know my name.

I hear whispered words that I can clearly understand, saying they will save a place for me.

They all gather around a tall and glorious tree full of an unknown fruit.

I walk toward them with my hand
held out, hoping that I can have a
share.

A beautiful women appears out of
no where and says: "It's not your
turn."

I step away then she smiles at me and that is when I awake.

I know that it all was just a dream,
but to me it seemed so real.

So I pray to God everyday, asking him
to pull me to heaven.

I am not use to writing non-rhyming poems. I did this one for a contest. I know that it's the worse poem that I have ever written, but I beg you not to be to harsh with your commenting. You can be truthful because the truth is what I want. Thank you

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I'm not to sure on this one, because i don't usually like poems that don't rhyme, but i don't know why you thought it was so bad, it was very well written.

  • 17 years ago

    by Misstress

    I used to write in non rhyming- free style forms of poetry, I like free styles and definitely loved this one,
    The words used is calming, like a scented wind.
    It is truly a worthwhile read.

    your getting better and better in each poem ..
    keep it up.

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Honestly i did enjoy every word of it, it is a great poem as it can hold many debate, from what i read, it is a poem in which you want heaven cause from your point of view its better than this life that is why you do dream about it, and in a way the way I intrepted the poem its us ppl when we lose hope in one place we wish for another place, rather than trying to make this life like a heaven togheter, this poem really touched me as it made me to think and realize many concept of it, i give a 5/5 to it, very nicely and loveable poem

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