by PassingAngel Oct 14, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
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The pain is unimaginable |
by *Charisma*
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It was an excellent poem especially the last stanza. but your rhyme scheme changed halfway through so it made it a little hard to follow at times. Good job though! Jpoet* |
by Aussie
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AWESOME!!!! |