by Liv Mar 16, 2004
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
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Its hard to forgive, |
by Rachel
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THIS POEM IS ACTUALLY REALLY GOOD SO KEEP ON WRITING! THANX |
by robyn
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you didnt really stick to a rhyme scheme, but it still flows good. it is short but it is to the point so that doesnt matter.... i liked it |
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Its on the short side but is really good and too-the-point. ;) Cant wait to read more |