by X2892 Oct 17, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
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I cant do it- |
by Kristina
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Wow amazing job on writing such a sad poem, but i can relate to some of it! great job! 5/5 |
by Tricky Daze
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So perfect and so sad,good job,5/5 |
by emmerz
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Another great one, the emotion was just seeping through this, it was well done! and the dynamics of the poem were great, with all the caps and the things in (--) s... i loved the intensity of this. FLAWless! to me anyways :) |
by Kristina
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Oh wow this is wonderful. so much emotion in it. i love it. the rhyming was all that good, but you tried. great job! 5/5 |
by Mousie
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Good poem... good emotion... 5/5 |