You're not there.

by Flaminia   Oct 18, 2006


Questions
spoken with your voice
running through my skin.
Presence
of breaths on my chest.
Warmth,
covering pain,
as I remember
our last night together,
Fear,
according to my feelings,
swallows my memories
in distant spaces
through rough past.
And present comes back
with your child.
You're not there.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Autuumnbree

    Very good poem, deep and truely passionate. I like poem like these that don't give you every detail but just enough....VNP

  • 17 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Thats a nice poem!
    liked it alot...

  • 17 years ago

    by Miss Pipp

    I completely agree with Tammie. It was a really powerful poem and there was heaps of emotions in it! Keep writing =]

    Pip xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Tammie

    WOW! How you wrote and structured that, made it a very powerful poem. I wasn't expecting the ending, which makes it even better. Your improving hun! Keep it up and i'll keep reading. =] 5/5

    Tammie xo

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