Pitch black ..........

by Shriya   Oct 18, 2006


It is pitch black
yes too dark
i think i heard her
she the one i feared from
Fantasy
she died
said she will haunt me till i die like her
i am sure she will kill me
for after all i couldn't save her
it was a saturday
it was pitch black like tonight
i went into her room
i saw her pouring over a book
her diary i saw from the leather
one second she was in front of me
next she was being sucked into tar
boiling hot tar ........
i rushed forward
tried to pull her from there
i know i would never forget that scene
then i saw her diary
the words that were written made me freeze
made me leave her grip
for it said
I WILL DIE TONIGHT
that was what worried me
today in the present
i went to my room
i saw my diary
i read it
it said
I WILL DIE TONIGHT
scared i looked around
my mom had entered
just as i had done to her
she stared at me
as i had done to her
she came to pull me
i was getting sucked in the tar
it reminded me about saturday
then my mom froze
just as i had
she let go of me
just as i had
i shrieked the words
I WILL HAUNT U TILL U DIE
just as she had
i saw the world inside the tar
and i have become part of it now

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  • 17 years ago

    by WakingFreedom

    That was.....Great. I enjoyed it. It is a sad story. Were did you come up with it? You have an amazing mind.

  • 17 years ago

    by Roxy

    Shriya, once again a great poem, youve done well once again.This poem is very desccribed well. I hope to see more of these poems great work. I love it its deep and very starnge in a good way . Looking forward for more poems like this one. Your best friend emily xox love you byebye!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Morgan

    Hey Shriya this is sad and it's touching... i love your poems

  • 17 years ago

    by SadKuteAngel

    I like the poem..

    ..its just i dont understand it much.. i wish i did.. maybe when u ahve time u can explain it ot me... if u want to :)