Shock

by Shriya   Feb 2, 2007


I am in a shock
cause what i see rite now is really shocking
i will tell u how ti started
i was nicely sitting in the garden when my dog ran away
i found him sitting next to a graveyard
and there i gasped for i saw him all hurt
i took him home
but where was my house
i could not see it
in it's place i saw a fair
i asked for my house but they said i was unlucky cause it got burned up
i was filled with sadness cause my mother and father got burned up
and all because my dog ran away
i was gratefull to my dog
because it lead me away
but now when i return to my new house in sydney
i see my mother washing the dishes
i see my father mowing the lawn
wat was going on ????
then my father saw me
and what i saw made me full of shock
cause instead of his face was a really bloody skull
these r ghosts i realized
ghosts who want to kill me
my dog changed my death day
but not now
because when they made me sit on the sofa
i fell into a black hole
and today is the day they all mourn for me
and it was this day that 20 years ago
my house burned up

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  • 17 years ago

    by Roxy

    Hey shriya,,
    Nice poem It#s really deep the way you described how you felt on that day!! I hope there is going to be many more poems like this one. It;s really long to!! LOL,, hruya I'm at your house right now...DONT #EMILY; me for making a long comment!! GOD! XD!! Just kidding my bezzie!! I hope to see you again soon and HAPPY B=DAY SMIRTI!! lol!! Wow,, I#m being random again uh-oh beward the fearsome emily!! llol Love you xox Emily!! XOX

  • 17 years ago

    by Morgan

    Keep writing im loving it!!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Louie

    Good job! I liked it alot. Keep on writing!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Mo

    Wow - that was like one of those weird dreams you have where things keep changing and not making sense but seeming so real. Good job.