I'm Here.

by BeautifulxMess   Oct 20, 2006


This door that stands before me
has a meaning to it some how.
A knob that will turn to a new start
of becoming what I see now.

A field of roses I can clearly see
further then what the eye catches.
Reaching my hand on a cloud
to settle on what my heart fetches.

God opens up I see before my eyes
He makes me smile ear to ear.
"My dear, as you can see I'm open
to you have no fear, I'm here.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Hmmm very beautiful more and the last line... 5/5 keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by Live, Laugh, Love

    Aww really cute. The punctuation was good, try adding a couple commas though. Great write.

  • 17 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    This is very nice . I liked this a lot .
    The rhyming was nice, and it had a great flow to it .
    Keep it upp .
    ..ღ__MiNDYY

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    Very nice poem. Though I don't personally believe in God. I still liked this poem very much.

    There was a wonderful meaning to it, with a nice smooth flow. Rhyming was also great. And the ending really brought the poem together! Keep it up!!

    Natalie``

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