In The First Place

by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere   Oct 23, 2006


To:: Jesse. Thanks alot for breaking my heart like I was a twig. I f-in hate u!

Sometimes I wonder
What went wrong
To make you hate me
To make you not love me
To make you leave me
Like you did to me
I seriously loved you
With my whole heart
I gave you everything I had of me
But all in the end
It didn't matter
You threw it in the fire
And burned it all away
All you left me with
Is your picture and your letter
You wrote to me when we were together
And your myspace message you first sent to me
When we first met
I just cant give it all up
I just want to know
What made you think that forever
Would just be a few months
You knew I loved you
You just didnt care anymore
I turned so many people down
I left my friends just to make you happy
I'm disgusted now that you left
And left me in the middle of no where
I should've listened to my friends
You werent the one for me
You never cared in the beginning
I just want to know
Before you hate me anymore then you do now
What went wrong
To make you hate me
To make you not love me
To make you leave me
I just need you to know
I just can't let you go just like that
I'm still in love with you
But what does it matter to you
I was just another game you gambled on your list
Sometimes I wonder
How my life would be now
If I never met you in the first place

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  • 17 years ago

    by Ashla

    I HATE HIM FOR DOING THIS. I LOVED IT. IT SHOWED ALOT OF EMOTION AND HATE TOWARDS HIM.

    I LOVE YOU SIS!
    ASHLA

  • 17 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This poem reflects very well in free prose the agony of rejection, or lost love [broken heart] It brings back many memories of my broken heart
    never too old to get your heart broken
    it will soon heal and you will cautiously try to love again

    Sorry about my rambling the poem moved me that much
    5

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Wow...a very sad and upsetting poem about love. One of my favorite quotes is "Getting your heart broken is an unwritten rule of love" and I guess in this case it's true. I have never ever loved someone with all my heart, I have crushes on guys, sure. But no "in love" type of thing yet. Sorry this happen to you, no one deserves it. Though this was an excellent poem and you are a fantastic writer! 5/5 Keep up the good work, I look forward to reading more of you poems in the near future.

    Innoc3ntStar

  • 17 years ago

    by catherine

    I liked it, I can relate to it, but the swearing in the middle ruined it for me. It was an emotional poem though, and you can see all your views.

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