Forever Good Night

by Jonathan Blair   Oct 23, 2006


He kneeled by is bed and prayed before he went to bed,
He crossed his hands,
His wrists repeatedly cut,
Hair to his shoulders,
Blackened by the dye,
Eyeliner around his eyes,
Spikes around his neck,
He prayed for forgivness,
When he got up from his knees,
He sat on his bed,
Pulled out his gun,
Pointed at his temple,
And shot.

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  • 17 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    ''He kneeled bye is bed and prayed before he went to bed,''

    ^^ The ''bye'' is supposed to be -by-. Other than that it was OK.. The flow didn't exactly appeal to me. Either did the poem itself.. I'm sure you can do better. 4/5

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