I Laugh And Smile, But I'm Not Okay

by Kristina   Oct 24, 2006


You see me laugh,
And assume that I don't cry,
Because I hide my tears away,
Cause I don't want you to see.

I put a smile on my face,
Pretend that I'm happy,
But you don't look hard enough,
To notice I'm really not.

You ask me "whats wrong?"
I reply "nothing, I'm okay."
You believe me and walk away.
How can you not see that I'm not?

Just because I laugh doesn't mean I don't cry.
Just because I smile doesn't mean I'm happy.
Just because I say I'm okay doesn't mean I am.

Copyright © March 06, 2006 - Kristina M

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  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    This life it self is about pretending, we always have to pretend, pretend everything is ok smile with each other while we hide the drops of tears,
    I can relate to this poem as most of the time i have to hide my tears and show a fake smile to make others happy.

    great write 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Void

    Hey. Honestly, I think this poem is done sooo much, because it seems that so many people do the same thing and hide within fake emotion. However, with that being said, I have made a few of my own and probably will make some more (I write to rant); the only difference between yours and everyone elses- including my own- is that yours didn't drag on So much that I decided to stop reading. There wasn't any plain repitition to make it laggish and boring, you re-worded things to get your point out, and for that I say...Well Done!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by donna

    It's amazing how many people don't notice what we don't say.. Excellent job on this.. very well written and so sad but true a lot of the time 5/5 well done xx

  • 18 years ago

    by sweetiepie18

    Excellent keep it up!