Mr. Wrong

by BeautifulxMess   Oct 24, 2006


She had a heart solid as gold.
Her voice was soft when she speak.
She was the friend to always hold.
She always kept you on your feet.

She never did any wrong at all.
She always had her head up high.
She'd help when a child has fall.
Her words of wisdom made you fly.

Then one day she found a boy.
They talked all day into the night.
I tell you, her heart was full of joy.
She told herself he's Mr. Right.

They went on a few dates or two.
Couple months flew and gone by.
They loved each other so true.
They held each other when they cry.

God forbid if she end on the ground
She loved him with all her heart.
They fought times around.
They got through the dark.

Then one night it all fell in place.
Alone in his house with one light.
He grabbed her soft gentle face.
Kissed her through the night.

To the bed they made themselves.
Her stomach start to drop.
She couldn't believe herself.
Her mind was in utter shock.

They made love into the day.
She woke up in his bed alone.
Unknowing if he just went away.
She put her close on and was gone.

Two weeks later she saw the nurse.
She said with the test results are in.
What she heard made her curse.
No protection was used for it.

She just wants to cry in regret.
Where did she go wrong in life?
She just couldn't believe any of it.
A baby to come dimmed the light.

She told him what she was told.
He had an anger in his blue eye.
She didn't know what he unfold.
She tried so hard not to cry.

He said he doesn't want the baby.
He didn't want her anymore.
She hit the ground and went crazy.
He left her on the cold floor.

Nine months and she got a girl.
It's hard to see she had his cheeks.
He used to be a part of her world.
He's long gone to ever be seen.

She wanted to cry everyday.
She held it back to stay strong.
Mr. Right was far away.
Mr. Wrong made her a mom.

A girl with a passion to always help.
She was a strong child to count on.
Now, she just always wants to yell.
She'll never forgive, Mr. Wrong.

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  • 17 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    Wow this is so sad. And this girl does have a right to yell at the man for leaving them alone like that! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    So sad! But sad is good lol! I really like this poem. Good job and easy too interpret. Keep on writing. By the way, try not to always force rhymes. I know i do, but speek... lol. Use spoke and rhyme it with broke. Just a hint, not a necessity. 5/5 Gret work!

  • 17 years ago

    by xxEvilAngelxx

    My suggestions/corrections:
    Her voice was soft when she speak.--- the i guess grammar and tenses of the words are off and it doesn't make much sense, and same with this line: She'd help when a child has fall.
    She put her close on and was gone.--- close should be clothes
    No protection was used for it.---I think it would sound betterif you had: FOR no protection was used for it.
    Fantastic poem though! Love the story it portrays!

    xxEvilAngelxx

  • 17 years ago

    by ModernDavinci

    OMG. Wow wow wow. This is sososo amazing...