Unwritten

by missblueyes   Oct 27, 2006


Unwritten

Singing this song inside my soul
I hear the melody that is no longer dead
I see my thoughts through a sheet of glass
I'm living my life no longer in the past
Unscrambling the words to write you a poem
The notes on my paper create a picture of you
Your eyes gaze into mine
Grasping the person inside me
Side by side we walk a new path
I feel your finger tips trace over mine
Your sweet eyes and soft smile overwhelm me
My song sings to the rhythm of your heartbeat
Releasing the soul that was locked within me
These words are all my own
But words can't express the way I feel

**-I wrote this for my first love. He's actually the only guy I have ever truly loved.-**

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  • 17 years ago

    by Bridgette

    This was very well written. The imagery and word usage that you had in here was brilliant. The only thing that I would suggest would be to break it down a bit to make it a little easier to read. But other than that I loved this poem. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    I loved the first part of this poem but personally I feel you could have ended it succinctly with the line

    But words can't express the words I feel

    as for me the remaining lines seem a bit repetitive and superfluous. I don't mean to sound harsh but to me they spoil an otherwise great piece :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Vonnie McHugh

    This was lovely thanks for sharing

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